Thursday, June 18, 2015

The Devil In The Woods! week 8




 ●   I write simple and compound sentences using varied conjunctions
 CHARACTERS!
The girl (madelyn)
The boy (zack)
The devil
The dancing bear (Bobbie)
The Devil in the woods!


Madelyn was a little 10 year old girl. She lives in a little cottage in the village. One day her big brother Zack went out into the woods to find some apples. He had gone out for HOURS. Madelyn started to get a bit worried. So she packed up her useful exploring acuitmint, to go out in the woods and find her brother. Suddenly a letter appeared outside her cottage door. It was from zack! It said....


Madelyn! help! i’m stuck in the woods with this creepy looking  devil. He wants the apples I picked. But I didn’t give them to him. So he locked me in his cave cage, Thingy. I saw some more kids in the cage. Some of them were the kids from our school. There was billy, brian., mia, ovlivia, holly, and max! They were all crying. Madelyn, please go and get some help! please!


From your big brother ZACK!
P.s bring some cookies and ice cream.  


Oh no! Zack and some of her friends from the village were kidnapped by this devil. But madelyn is not going to tell the people in the village, or they will panic too much and  get worried. Plus she was not going to bring ice cream and cookies, so instead she brought carrots, apples, oranges, and nut bars.  So she ran into the woods to save her brother and friends.


On the way she felt like someone was following her. She picked up a big stick for a weapon and turned around. It was big, it was brown, it was fat, it was furry, it was... Dancing!? It was a bear! AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. They screamed. “Oh, hi. said the bear. “my names Bobbie, Bobbie the bear”! He said proudly. “Oh”. um hi”.  said madelyn. OHHHH, it was bobbie the bear. The friendliest bear you could imagine. He would help anyone. But wait, He could help madelyn save her brother zack. So she asked Bobbie if he could help. He said sure. They carried on walking.  


Back at the cave...
Zack tried to break the cage with a stick (stupid idea. the stick would break not the cage).  “ I will not let you go until you give me your appels”! said the devil.  “NEVER”! said zack. “What did you do”! said brian. Zack said if they give the devil their apples, THEY will starve.  Then brian said “That will be the only way we could get free. “FINE!” said zack.  “ hey”! “Mr Devil”. “You can have your appels now”.  The devil was surprised.  It was amazing.  The devil let them out. All of the kids sprinted to the woods and back to the village. And on the way back they saw madelyn and told her everything. They even invited bobbie the bear to stay for sleepover.
They lived happily ever after!


THE END
BY KHUSHI

Maui Comic

Kelly anne and I have made this comic about how maui found his father.
This is the part when Maui saw his mother running away and going down a deep hole Comics   Make a comic   Bitstrips.png
Maui saw his mother walk away. She started running faster and faster. then
she came to a hole. she jumped….  

TO BE CONTINUED! ! !

Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Fluffy Robot

This is our product design for our writing.
FLUFFY ROBOT! ! !
By Khushi & Skyla!