Thursday, April 14, 2016

My scene description

Today I will be Blogging about my Scene Description, because I have worked really hard on my different sentence starters. It was hard to think of different sentence starters but I still did it and it was fun! I am very proud of this. Hope you enjoy!




Task: Write a scene description of a picture you have chosen.

Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
  • Uses the present tense


Scene Description


I rub my eyes and turn around……  It’s the most beautiful sight. Gloomy night sky, filled with misty colors…. But wait…. There is a gloomy shadow of a beautiful wolf. The stars look so pretty!  They like diamonds! Misty pink looks so pretty! The orange looks like a neon orange. This reminds me of galaxy.  You can see the tiniest bit of green, behind the big spooky tree. This looks so beautiful!! I feel the breezy wind go SMACK onto my face. Colorful Northern lights are just magical!  A perfect spot for camping, because, can you just imagine sleeping under the beautiful lights!? Smelling beautiful flowers in the nature, make me feel so happy! I hear the wolf howling in the distance! I touch one of the wrinkly trees. They feel so old, like they have stayed here since the dinosaurs were alive!!
This is the most magical place in the world!
By Khushi



I hope you liked my blog post!
I am very proud of my Scene Description! Bye!