Friday, June 24, 2016

My Reflection!

Hello everyone! Welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to blog about my reflection! I hope you like it!


 Self-Reflection questions for reports

What is your biggest achievement this year and why?
My Biggest achievement this year has been finishing my maths tasks. Because lots of them are pretty hard and I am very proud that I finished them


What is your favourite thing about being in Rimu hub?
My favorite thing about being in rimu hub is, making lots of friends, and helping the year fours. I really like helping people. And I really like the tracking sheet. It makes me feel like i’m working in a office.


What are you like as a learning buddy?
I think I am very helpful as a learning buddy, b]because my learning buddies this year really like it when I help them. And it helps them get there work done too.


Explain a time that you were in the learning pit this year. How did you get out of it?
This year I was in the learning pit when I got stuck on my maths task. First I tried Some of my mats strides I know. And then I ask my learning buddy, After that I ask someone who had finished that task, And after that I ask the teacher! And I got out of the learning pit!!


What was your favourite learning task so far and why?
I really REALLY liked one of my reading task, were we had to make a book for little kids. I didn’t get to finish, But I made some books for little kids at my house. They turned out REALLY good.


What is your favourite subject and why?
My favorite subject is literacy because, I really REALLY LOVE writing stories and I want to learn how to write like famous writers. I think writing stories is good for the brain.

Sunday, June 19, 2016

My free choice writing!



Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!


The Long Dark
Day 1
Oh you have got to be kidding me!! The most dangerous snowstorm is coming to Idaho!! Now me and my family have to go the most safest country in the world! New Zealand! I mean there’s no such thing as the safest country in the world right?


My family has to get ready! I hate getting ready! But luckily I am always prepared! My sister Rachel always has to pack her stupid make up!


Here are the stupid things my family like HAVE to pack!


Mum: Cooking book! Like who does that!?
I just think it’s because she wants to show off her cooking skills to the kiwi’s!


NOTE: ask the New Zealanders why are they called the kiwi’s??


Rachel (little sister): Makeup! I’ll tell you the main reason why she has makeup!
It’s because she doesn't want anyone to the the tiny pimple on her chin! I don't even wear lipstick! And she patches up SO MUCH foundation and lip gloss and every single makeup equipment you could think of.


Timmy: His laptop! He just plays video games and Minecraft all the time!!
I just hate the sound PEW PEW PEW on the TV and his laptop!
Me(Stacy): My teddy bear since I was a kid! Roxy! He is so cute. And I just love him!
(By the way, a teddy bear is not a stupid thing to pack)


Okay now I’m all packed and my family are still packing!
WHEN WILL THEY EVER FINISH!

Day 2
Tomorrow we're leaving our lovely house where dad used to live.  Mum said we have to spend time together, And we are not allowed to argue like we used to all the time. I have to try my best not to fight! But big sisters always fight with the little ones, if they get into your private stuff!
Rachel went into to my diary when her friend Hannah came over.
Both of them are little barbie brats! But I shouldn’t really blame my sister, Hannah is the one who comes up with all the devil brat ideas.
Timmy is playing VIDEO GAMES and he can’t understand anything what we say. Once he snuck in his laptop in bed at MIDNIGHT and played video games all night!!! I can’t believe mum wouldn’t realize that he was playing games in bed, from that look on his gloomy face with VERY VERY VERY Dark under eyes! I can't believe it mom, just can’t believe it….

Day 3
The day as come…we are all packed and now…...we are going to leave our beautiful house. I still have my family necklace on.. With dad on it. “SWISH SWISH SWISH SWISH”!! I hear the helicopter outside the government sent!! Lots and lots of helicopters are going to people’s houses to pick them up and take them to New Zealand. “Come on kids”!! Shouts mom.. Everyone Rushes outside, and I just walk like a homeless puppy writing in its diary. ‘EVERYONE IN THE COPTER”. Said a big strong Buffy man.


He looks like just like dad, just like him!!!! But he Can’t be dad right? The night dad diapered was so scary. We tried so hard to look for him. Even the police couldn’t find him. The police said he was dead…. I got so mad, I shouted NO, HE CAN’T BE DEAD!! That night I snuck out to find him. I went to a faraway spot where me and dad build a secret hideout and no one knew about it. He wasn’t there. I gave up looking for him. But I still thought he was alive. A big strong buffy man can’t just wander off, or get kidnapped! I thought my dad was the strongest father in the world. But everyone gave up… no one could find him. The police thought that he got shot in the back, and got buried somewhere.


Everyone just…Gave Up….


Mom is the first one to hop in., then Rachel, then Timmy, and then me… The pilot hops back in and say’s. “Everyone ready”?!! “YESSS” we all shout. “THEN LET’S GO”!! He looked like he was happy that the storm is coming. Just like dad who LOVED it when storms came. His favorite storm is the Katrina Hurricane. He is the most bravest man in the world. The helicopter took off. We were so high!! Timmy was playing stupid video games on his tablet. What a goof! Rachel is patting on SOOO much makeup. I mean what the point!?!?!?!


“JHVBJRRUBGU”! What that sound? Is that the helicopter. “Juyaficbauyun -gfdsyhvughgfdvgjbnxf”!!
Yea that’s the helicopter alright”! “ Do you hear that mum??”
OH NO!!! THE HELICOPTER IS FALLING!!” “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”!
!!BOOM!!!
……


What? Where am I?
“Mum, Rachel, Timmy”?
“WHAT”!! THE HELICOPTER!! It’s all ruined!!
Mum…….Rachel…...Timmy……Sir Pilot?..........They're…...Gone…...
“How will I survive In the canadian wilderness”??!?!?!
“HOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWl”
“wait”...................Is that a wolf”??? Oh no!!!


I have to survive!!!
I run as fast as I can to the little cabin in the distance!!
I run SO fast!! I was like a cheetah! I finally make it!! Yes!!! There’s a bed and some food!! I really need to rest! I flop down on the bed and fall asleep….

3 HOURS LATER
UH?? What where am I!! I’m in my bedroom! I’m alive! “MUM, DAD, TIMMY, RACHEL’!!! I run to the living room. Everyone here!! Everything is fine!! Dad's alive!!! YAY! (I can’’t believe in my dream (nightmare) dad was dead!! Come on Stacy you have got to be kidding me)!!!
“Make your breakfast sweetie”! Mum said. “You must be starving”! Said dad. “Okay”!!! I say!
It was all just a dream!!









Tuesday, June 14, 2016

My iPROUD


Today I will be blogging about my iPROUD, Because I want to show the thing I am proud of. I am very proud of it!!

Hope you enjoy!!


My Best Learning

This is my…
Argument task.


I am proud of this because...
This a very long writing, I think this is my biggest writing I have ever done. I think it is very persuasive to people who are not so great with dogs.

My biggest challenge was…
I actually thought that my writing started to get off the topic, and I thought that it started to get boring as well. So I had trouble making it not so boring, and It was actually easy to figure out the parts where it went off the topic. So I had to fix those up.

Here is my writing!

=Purpose: to PERSUADE
I am learning how to improve my sentence formation
Success Criteria:
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
  • Include simple and compound sentences*
  • Include some complex sentences**
  • State your point of view, then include three big reasons to support it.
  • Include emotional and persuasive language

My topic is:  Why dogs are better than cats!

Believe me, Dogs are way smarter than cats! I will show you the difference in both of them. But I am not saying it is BAD to have a cat. I’m just saying that I think dogs are better. I have good and bad reasons about these furballs!!!
DOGS!
Dogs are very Kind animals. They Protect kids a lot. Well only some dogs are very nosy. But…. there are lots of dogs in the world that a very good with people!  
                                                     
Lots of dogs like German Shepherds, labradors, Pit Bulls, and heaps more dogs are VERY athletic. Lots of athletic people would love these kind of dogs. Some people that are not athletic can still own these dogs.
ANYONE CAN!

Dogs are VERY good with kids. But…..there is a problem with some breeds...like….Pit Bulls,Bulldogs,Huskies, And a few more big strong dogs. But little dogs, including german shepherds, labradors, and surprisingly Rottweilers(some) are good with kids to. Plus they protect kids too!

Dogs are very responsable pets. They take care of the house, make sure there are no robbers around, and lots more. Dogs sometimes get just a LITTLE bit greedy when it comes to food though. :)
Sweet Dogs are very cute(every dogs are sweet! Right?). Lost of sweet dogs just love to lick your face and start jumping on you. However people sometimes don’t like it when dogs do that, so they sometimes shout at the do. Which breaks the poor dog’s heart. :(
Dogs understand a lot of things. Dogs can realize if you are sad.      
They listen to owner (mostly). But they can always get naughty. LIKE EVERYONE!
They protect you from danger (Mostly). Like I said before dogs protect you from heaps of danger.
They are very protective with kids!(Like I said before)
They have a very good sense of smell if someone is going to rob(e.x) you.

Now Here are a few things about cats.
Cats are very good with the elders.
They are SOMETIMES not so good with guests.
They are (SOMETIMES) very dangerous to groom, because they are very fussy, They might attack you!
(I don’t know much about cats)

So I hope you agree with me now. I hope you think that dogs are better than cats. But that doesn’t mean you have to HATE cats! You can always own any animal you want. After all it is your choice anyway!

So I hope you agree with me now!